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Quite an exciting story 0n one hand it was a great story about life in an age where corporal punishment was still used and indeed for the area i can relate as spankings when i was growing up was the norm to boys and girls and although i don’t really remember anyone saying how brave they were about getting spanked i do also to admit that i did see and hear some spanking myself and i thought how great that was. I like the F/f spanking and i am an otk fan first and foremost so that was the most exciting part of the story. I also enjoy willingness of the spankee to get spanked. The only thing i would change would be a little more on the mother/ daughter spanking as a remerberance by either mother or daughter as a flashback. Thanks for the warning about the spankings as being all inclusive i am normally a female spanker only and try to avoid other genres, but this was very well done. Thanks for the great story and have a great day.
Jim
Thanks a lot, Jim, I really appreciate the feedback. This story took me a really long time to write and is vastly different to what I normally write. My goal here is to use the backgrounds as a root for the mindsets of the individuals. It is very rare that I would do that but I also anticipate writing several chapters to this story so I think that the background story is an important post to put in the ground.
Obviously I almost exclusively write M/F stories, so I thought that it would be a nice challenge for me to write about genres that I don’t normally write about. Even if that means including an M/M flashback. Someone frequently makes comments to me that M/F spankings are God’s will and the only ‘Natural’ genre, however, I can guarantee to you that when I grew up there was probably more M/M punishments than there were anything else, especially when you take into account caning in schools and boarding school punishments.
My goal was also to leave the story open ended to see which direction people wanted to go in, I will add one vote to Mrs. Ferris/Elaine in your honor 🙂
Rich
My friend.
Amazing and I mean am amazing spanking story. Classic to say the least. Well written nice background and just a slamming spanking. Love the birthday spanking add on a bit of discipline spanking. Love it.
Personally when I was 11 I too watched a 16 year old sister of a friend get spanked by her mom over her light blue panty. I too watched from a window overlooking their laundry room basement. It changed my life. You brought that memory to life. Love it.
I took the poll. Sorry this is late but I was on holiday last week.
Terrific work. Thanks you
Regards
Ron
By the way congratulations on being who you are and leaving the panty in place. Brave but brilliant
Ron
Ron,
I wrote that portion specifically for you, as I am sure that you are aware 😉 You have always been very supportive of my work so I thought that it would be fun to incorporate your memory into the story 🙂
Rich
Thank you, what an excellent story, and plenty of leads into future installments. I don’t mind if a naughty girl’s panties stay on or not, what’s important is she has a sore bottom and justice has been done.
Amen, Alf, you are preaching to the choir.
I was raised by strict Mom I was (age removed as this is an adult site) years old that I remember when my Mom spank me for the first time but I never imaging at age twenty my strict Mom still spank me the same way the maid was instructed by my mom the right way to punish a disobedient daughter Early bed time was her favorite.after school I was undress by the maid under my Mom voiced command get in the bathtub and get a quickly bath.taked to my room and put my pyjamas on. over Mommy’s knee’s for a hand spanking.corner time in my knee’s with my pyjamas down. send to my room and put me in bed by two in the afternoon if I complained Naked in my knee’s in front of Mommy getting my hand punish with a ruler.I got to the point the punishment turn in to pleasure now I’m in older women I has to pay in spankers to give me pleasure.I don’t know to hatted my Mom or thank her for what she did
I won’t comment any more I spend almost one hour’this morning and my comment never got posted I don’t see what’s wrong to be spanked in pyjamas by strict Mommy I seen worst and in this side but that’s is no my decisions
I wish l could be spanked by a strict mommy like you had
I was honored and read this all the time the memories flood back. Thank you.
I also must say the response to your story is very cool.
Makes me feel good that folks still enjoy reading a terrific story.
Thanks
NJSpank,
I had a very similar memory though not exactly the same as yours. I watched a spanking, at least a few swats of it when I walked into a room where the sounds of a spanking were coming from. The girl in question was facing me, but I was able to look over her distraught face and also see a blue panty covered bottom being spanked before I was sent on my merry way. So whilst I described your memory in this story, I did have my own backstory to draw from 🙂
Rich